All Comments on 'Leather and Lace Ch. 01'

This guy isn't slow is he? But yet so gentle and perceptive, and I love the fact that he's a Brit, (we are good you know). You tell your story so delicately, so romantically. I'm looking forward to some character development but my mind already has a preconceived idea of how I would want this to go. Please don't leave it too long before the next installment, please.

Where do Eve and Gabe go from here, Lake Quinault lodge? It is the off season.

Please keep posting more chapters! I was disappointed that it ended. I wanted more.

If you are creating an email lists of fans to be notified when you add more chapters, please add me to your list.

Awesome! For such a young woman! It will be your vocation should you choose it as such.

I love everything about this story so far. Where's my Gabriel???? lol

That was hot! Please continue!

Yes, please submit the rest of the story. Like someone else said....Where's my Gabriel?? I want one too!

I like where the story seems to be heading. I can't wait to read the rest!

You have a good balance here. Keep it up.

Awesome first chapter and can't wait to see what happens next!

and i look forward to hurrying on to the next chapter! love the style and pacing and the gentle humor...and i really like the characters...

i like Gabriel's style...i feel like it reflects how i would act around Eve...now if i only had his looks!! :o)

very good and very entertaining!!

david xxx

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I guess you were not happy with the lack of feed back on your story. It has been sitting in my "waiting to be finished/added to directory" for two years. You had me hooked - waiting to what happened to your characters. If I don't hear from (writing or e-mail) you, will delete the story on my next review of my "pending directory".