All Comments on 'Leaving the Navy Ch. 07'

Another Excellent Chapter to an incredible story. Keep it coming.

I can count on you! Thank you.

You totally rock!! Just when I was getting ready to contact you to ask for more you deliver!! Mmmmmm! Yummy! That the only way to describe the way your writing makes me feel!! Please sir can I have some more!!! Keep it coming I can definitely take it. The Princess

Scorpio, Your Doms are the kind of husband that I wish I could be for my wife of 18 years. True this is fiction not real life, but maybe there is a chance...

Scorpio, I have read this story twice over and it keeps getting better all the time. I would like to see more chapters in this story. Being retired from the Navy I really liked the story alot.

I loved this new chapter, and how You worked it so Jim and Krystn realized they truly were 'adult' enough to consumate their relationship and stop moping about, being depressed (is that what Krystn was?), or angry... and frustrated!!

Nick truly is a man of steele when it comes to standing for what is right, yet let one of his wives come around... and he's all velvety smoothness with just the right touch of Dom.

Your writing definitely gets better and better. Can't wait to read the other new chapters!

I suppose it's nice to have a way to go with the story, but the mistake in ages missed by this many people is way too farfetched. Even in the fantasy world of Literotica, it goes too far imho.