All Comments on 'Leaving the Navy Ch. 08'

I am happy you are continuing this lovely tale.

Scorpio44 I`m really glad to see you writing again but you have me confused Who is Mark? i never noticed him before and did`nt you mean Fly instead of fry! you had "I'm in. I'll check to be sure but my thought is that we could fry from Atlanta and rent a car in Orlando. What'cha think?"

Pat M.

Atlanta,Ga

Oh!! I'm soooo glad you came back to submit more of your fabulous tales! It's so refreshing to see you haven't lost your writing mojo!! LOL! Sorry I watched austin powers on cable this weekend. PLease keep these wonderful stories coming they make my day!! Princess

I love the story, I loved the chapter... I love how Nick is with Pat, Della, and the other ladies... and I adore how he handles the children (or lets them handle him)... but I have one small criticism... and I do mean a small one.

You made this chapter TOO SHORT!! :-D

Is there more coming/cumming?

I really liked your stories. I like the detail, the characters, and i'm really sorry this isn't someone's life story!