All Comments on 'LeetCo: Loss Prevention'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

great story but you really need to get your work properly edited. otherwise very well thought out story line

leeterleeterover 1 year agoAuthor

Yeah... I re-read this after the fact and it was painful. I have an edit in the pipeline to massively fix things but I'm queuing it behind another edit. Not sure how "sat" became "sad" *wince*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wow, quite a wild ride! I've only read this part but see more Leet stories.... Me thinks I likey.... :D Will be reading more!

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