by firmhandsam
Fabulous early chapters - keep up the steamy domination & control themes! Possible suggestion - maybe an occasional aside to hear of the impact of the scenes from the sub's point of view. Also would like to explore the possibility of a former domme who is broken & joins the family, maybe with an occasional reprise to her former self to help control the other women.
I seriously have to wonder if this is a true story or not. You do use your own name after all.
Hmmmm!
A true Dom/ master would not share his girl with others like this asshole did.
The lifestyle is a lot better than what this ass would have us believe.
You do not let others hurt or screw your slave jusfor your jollies watching.
Scores 2/5