All Comments on 'Legally 'F' Pt. 01'

by MissYellowPanties

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coyote62coyote62almost 4 years ago

Need more story soon..... Loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Outstanding

OMG I need to know more, I need to find out what happens next please write more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Please write more in general, your stories are really detailed and vivid.

PinkPanties4mePinkPanties4mealmost 4 years ago

Well written! Please continue in as great detail !

sissyjolie4usissyjolie4ualmost 4 years ago

What a wonderful story, well written with delightful detail. Please do continue!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Absolutely fantastic, this was wild and imaginative. If I may make one suggestion, I loved the worldbuilding, but I don't have a good image of the characters, and would like to see them described a bit more.

Rachel_biTV_ukRachel_biTV_ukalmost 4 years ago
Excellent!

Lovely pace, detail and a great story! :-x

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

really excellent, so glad to see you writing again

MarieChaliceMarieChalice8 months ago

Nice fun and fantasy, but I believe Iran would only allow full transition! No half measures...

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