by CloudAdagio
I enjoyed the story very much, hope I get to read even more in the future! :D
Thank you all so much for your responses. Ch. 2 has been submitted and should be up soon!
Great start to what is hopefully a rather long series full of futa creampies and womb crushing. To start at the beginning, the backstory is detailed enough to give the readers an understanding of everyone's backstories but was short enough that it passed by quickly, which i very much appreciated. Then we got straight into the description of our first conquest, the beautiful Loralee, and the huge-cocked villain, Zerase.
The "combat" and throat fucking was a good start, always my preferred beginning, though i do with the deepthroat had gone on for a bit longer. Hopefully their stamina improves a bit as the seals get released. But regardless, the womb crushing and forced fucking / submission at the end was very hot. I hope that after Zerase is finished crushing everyone's wombs, she has a massive orgy with all the conquered sages using her fully released cock
This was great. Please continue. I see a lot of anime influence. I hope your story doesn't shy away from darker fetishes.