All Comments on 'Leigh's Christmas Break Pt. 02'

I loved this story!!! Well written! I loved the threesome with her father, it helped me pleasure myself :)

And too short. You guys write well and your descriptions are excellent. BUT > > > With your power to describe, slow it down, tease us with one well written episode at a time. You don't need to fill every hole in one story, spread out the lusty tales. Finally, it is your story, however, calling women sluts and demeaning them was never my thing. But as I said, it is your fantasy, your story, and you did it well. Ps, I love couples writing, I'm curious how does the process work with you folks.