All Comments on 'Leprechaun and the Lady'

Your story was nicely written until the last page... You finished it off as if you were in a hurry to go somewhere and just needed the story to be done and out of the way.. It was bit like a really nice meal followed by a questionable dessert kind of feeling.

The story, through the third page, was nice and I did enjoy it. I wish you well with your future endeavors.