All Comments on 'Lesbian Co-worker'

I would love a chapter 2, a slower pace, maybe they develop mutual feelings for one another?

I would love a chapter 2, somewhat harder though. Emma should fully submit to Becky after a while. Lots of hot game possible.

So many errors, spelling, grammar, and more that I just couldn’t finish.

Nice storyline and plot! For part2 would be fun if Becky seduces a hot newbie waitress with the help of Emma?

it was a good way to learn how to fuck as well as being fucked xx

I agree. A bit of a slower pace and def have her question her sexuality. Maybe Romance?

Outstanding start! Please write more, the start of a get together for them both?! Look forward to reading more from you! Thanks for sharing your story.

Yes please, chapter 2 would be great.

To be continued! Becky may have friends she wants to share Emma with. Or pimp her out to.

Yes, bring it on. Straight girls can bend. Nothing like a woman's love with another woman. Waiting for part 2, thank you for this story.

Playful, horny, and real.

Looking forward to part two. Maybe you turn the tables on Becky and win the bet next time, and offer the same forfeit. I'd love to see you on top :P

Great story. Would be nice to proof read it before putting it up.

Absolutly awesome. Look forward to reading the next installment

Please have your work proofed before posting.

Please continue this story!

Honestly there were so many mistakes I couldn't enjoy it. Spelling, grammar, tense usage. Please get it proofed.

Reading this, I suspect that English is not your first language. Writing in a foreign language can't be easy and you have made a good effort. I recommend finding an editor to help get your stories into better shape.

Looking forward to part 2. Perhaps an exchange of who wears the strap-on.

Need to check your spelling and grammer.

Hot! Also looking forward to part 2.

I want Part 2.. Please!!!

A win-win for Emma – she got her tips back and had an incredible first taste of sex with a woman. I loved this story with its mix of coercion, submission, a pretty girl and great sex. A second episode ? Yes please, definitely.

Great story,

cant wait for follow ups, on same lines , with maybe more of Becky`s friends, girls and guys using Emma,

i found the story easy to read.

Definitely continue the story line. There might be another waitress they could seduce. A chef that is a harder Butch. More Dominant. You could also bring in Emma's sister returning from college, or her mother visiting for the weekend. Lots of possibilities.

Great Story!

You are a really good writer and you do the Dom/sub stories very, very well. I'm very much hoping you will carry on with this and give us more.

Yes continue please

Great story! I reply like the length and the build up! I had imaged Becky to be with in 5 years older then Emma but I'm curious writer's intent on her age. I again really like the setting and the acts. I would like if they continued to have short bets for different acts. Like I'd love to hear Becky taking Emma's ass with the strapon!

Thanks a great work!

Incredible story! Can’t wait for part 2. Maybe Emma hooks up with a guy but his average 6 inch cock does nothing for her so she goes back to Becky and Emma doesn’t realize until it’s too late that Emma is fucking her with an even bigger strap-on.

Hot story, and easy to read. You sure should write a continuation, perhaps kinkier...

You should look up the difference between their and there, and your and you're. Awful writing.

Hot and racy enjoyed it very much, part 2 would be very welcome.

The story was exciting, and I hope that you continue writing. Having some serious writing errors.

As usual-your stories get me rock hard !

I have to agree with the many readers who commented on the dreadful writing. I could not get past the first two paragraphs before giving up on the story. If you plan to continue writing you need a skilled and patient editor. A ten year old child could do a better job.

Wonderful story with terrible spelling...

Excellent and can't wait for part two

I do not agree with other comments here about terrible spelling or writing. The story was enjoyable but my favourite story would be a female or as part of a couple (M-F, or F-F), visits a sex club and the woman is invited on stage with an experienced performer for sex in front of a crowd. I would like to read part 2.

I wanted to like the story, but all the typos distracted me. A little editing would do wonders.

Not normally a fan of lesbian stories but this was HOT and sure got my cock hard. Well written and in great detail. Felt like I was watching it

Rod

Great to see the ch2 has already been published - I’m off there now to read about the follow up and how Emma behaves around the butch lesbian at work from now on

This is such a hot story, though the spelling and typos are distracting, in the end they do not distract from the story. It's essence is so hot that it seeps through despite technical difficulties. I'm glad to see that there is a sequel, thank you.

Check your grammar!!

A nice little story, when a 'so-called' straight woman fights against her own inhibitions and then finds out that deep inside she actually likes the sex, just wait until the tide turns when she gets the hots for a straight woman and uses her new found skill and flirtation habits to seduce her into the world of Sappho. Well done, your writing gave me the impression that English isn't your mother tongue.

Wow I am a shy straight girl like Emma, I have worked as a waitress before and know just how she feels. If I had a mean co worker like that who always made those gross comments about me on the end of her strap on I would have made the same bet to shut her up too. I wonder would it have ended the same for me?

A great story! I always love the dynamics of a strong, confident Butch. Perfect! Thanks.

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