All Comments on 'Lesbian Magic Pt. 04'

I like the setup for all your work so far, but feel it would be greatly enhanced by a few more rounds of editing. The numerous typos and tense/grammar errors really distract and detract from your stories... almost as if your typing one handed while, stream-of-consciousness coming up with these potentially erotic tales. Please, due continue to refine your craft and, thanks for sharing it.