by LoquiSordidaAdMe
I like Leslie & Quinn, maybe a story where they get mashed, Quinn gets pregnant and get boobies
Thanks for the great comment, Marshalla. I'm glad you like Leslie & Quinn, they are two of my favorite characters too. They play a background role in my story "A Fairy Affair at a Faire". If you read between the lines, you might find a hint about where that relationship is headed. ;-)
... these two will be back.
Quinn has made progress, no doubt, thanks to Leslie's help. But she's still got a way to go.
Actually, I'd like to see them together, permanently, as they're good for each other.
5 Stars.
Thanks for the feedback, Anonymous. It's a fair point. I struggled with how to balance the character development and motivation with the sex within the imposed 750 word limit. If I'd had more words, I certainly would have expanded the sex. In the end, I decided to tell more story with less sex rather than have more sex with less story. There's certainly room for the opposite opinion. Thanks for reading!
The actual sex was a let down, the build up to it drug on for a bit and added unnecessary information. The wasted words could have been used to craft a better or even longer sex scene.
Thanks for taking the time to comment Crusader235. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I believe this is the first time I've ever seen a reader take credit for a four star vote. I hope it catches on.
I usually don't read this Catagory, but I'm reading all the 750's provided. Yours is Very well done for a short read. Four stars.
And so desperate they have to play with remote controlled toys. Too funny for words. Although they both come across as unlikable, manipulative fools. Icky stuff.
1 star
Thanks so much for taking the time to say so. I know I have "followers" but it is always extremely gratifying to hear that someone considers themselves a "fan". And an anonymous fan at that. So mysterious!
Very nice story. I don't usually read this category , but your story makes me wonder why. 750 words was no impediment. Each one counted, and you painted a pleasantly fleshed out vignette. Thanks, A fan of yours.