All Comments on 'Lessons Ch. 01'

That was hot, AF. Ended too quickly, though.

Keep them coming, I bet you are going to be one of favorite writers.

Right, a quick read and not flawless. Still, it was a nice story and I have seen worse.

I’d read you again. I thought it flowed well. Please pleasure us with more.

DG

Nice premise.

But story line seems rushed.

Had she ever seen an erect penis before? We don't know. Had she ever touched one? Again, we don't know. She seems to want to touch and play with his cock. Why not let her do it a little bit? Surely, she'd get excited -- even more excited -- seeing his cock, and playing with it, and enjoying his enjoyment. He could have stopped her before he had an orgasm.

Four stars.

Wonderfully done. 5 stars from me!