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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Foundation for a longer story for sure...... Good start and intriguing, expecting several more chapters...... <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Premise continues to be good.

But this is barely a scene, no less a chapter. Much too short.

Four stars for potential.

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long-time writer first-time sharer; I usually write poetry under a different pen name on a different platform but wanted to try my hand at something new

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