All Comments on 'Lessons for the Teacher'

"She was blessed with the most perfect cream balloons and berry rockets" , It had the potential to be a good story but using words like this just makes people laugh.

I agree some of the terms used were un-necessarily baby-ish BUT if you ignore all that, like I did, then you get a really hot story... with some naughty taboo play in the second part... I love it!

Well, all in all the story was pretty hot. But as someone else had said, certain phrases you used for describing things really just kind of spoiled it. I don't know, perhaps your intent was humor (and if so, well played!) but if it wasn't you..should probably consider trying to be *less* artistic with the wordplay. It just sounds silly.

The set up for this story was great. It could have used a stronger ending, but the classroom scene was very nice. Definitely worthy of a sequel.

This is the 3rd time I have read this Story,and I love it,only because I wish it could of happened to me.......?

In any genre, this would be a short-story masterpiece. There are some unusual

choices of words at some points, but the plotline is compact and characters very well

developed for such a short piece. There is a nice tension between what Julie tells herself she is doing in the classroom -- being considerate and responsible -- and the

compulsion she feels in her actions. Also, the story has a kind of wonderful social

acceptability. Everyone pretty much ends up getting what he or she wants, but the

social fabric is very well accommodated by the way the relationships sort out in the end, in my opinion.

Loved it all, a real turn on for submissive girls like me, thanks! ;)

So hooot!!