All Comments on 'Lessons from Daddy Ch. 03'

This is my first time reading a non-consensual sex story, and until now I think you've done a pretty good job, I really liked it, although I'm still new to this genre.

It's been a few days though since I've read the first two chapters, but I couldn't find the third one between your submissions, I just happened to spot it while I was adding your series to my favorites list. Hope you'll quickly fix this problem, and I apologize in advance if it's not your fault. Also, I'm sorry if you'll find any mistake, english is not my native language.

Anyway, I'm looking forward to chapter 4 <3

I didn't think that I could get any more aroused from incestual rape, but you proved me wrong. Congratulations

And why does she sound like she's 12?

I liked the other two, this one..not so much..

I really have enjoyed your series. One thing about part 3 is that I wish the actual sex scene was more detailed. It just felt rushed.

A beautiful love story between a dad and his slut daughter

Please update this amazing story it makes me so wet. PLEASE

I'm enjoying your stories however, I'd suggest and editor for grammar alone. There are many mistakes just with pronouns that make the story confusing and distract from the tale. Keep writing, don't get hung up on people's picadillos as you write about your own; there are people on the site who offer to edit if you are unsure about asking someone who you know off of here to read your stories.

I agree that you really need an editor. Attention to details can make or break a story. Little things like Ana walked into the restaurant with her father but Aria came running out.

good story but the way you kept slipping from first person into third person (often times in the same sentence) detracted from the tale for me... its a great effort though so dont be discouraged...

I hope you write more stories. This is quite hot. But your anal sex section is terrible.

'... as it slapped at my little rosebud and still aching cunt. In the next second, a large thick cock rammed hard into my tight little ass. It hammered and pounded my rectum mercilessly. I screamed, hollered and cried hard. It hurt so badly. ...'

This is not an anal sex scene and is my biggest pet peeve. ...in most stories.

You cannot ram a thick cock into a tight ass...or ram anything. Lubrication and patience...a finger...then another is necessary.

Even a finger then two then three, It is STILL THE MOST VIOLATING thing.

You write well, need some improvement as we all do, but that section could have bern great.

I loved it. Make more Chapters