Lessons in Blackmail

I see that you've only posted ONE story here. But, what you lack in quantity you sure make up for in QUALITY. For this story is utterly superb, one i thoroughly enjoyed reading. Despite the fact to me it's the 'other way around,' i normally enjoy tales were the female(s) is in charge and setting the agenda. Well done.

You did an amazing job. Look forward to sequel and your other ideas

Awesome, wish griffin would have gagged her with his long pole while mocking her.

Very, VERY hot story!!! I gave it 5 stars, will there be a part 2 ( I hope )? That was definitely a surprise ending.

Reads well. Subtle juxtaposition of the two boys personalities.

Great story. I enjoyed reading it. Hope to read more if you continue.

Loved this story! Are you planning any more?

Pretty good.

But you ended it too quickly. Poor Daniella had a lot on her mind that we really needed to hear about.

I know you were probably going for the 'dramatic, suspenseful ending that leaves us all wondering what happens next...' but, I think you've fallen a little short of that.

It just gives off the impression that you ran out of steam and couldn't think where to go next.

A lot of writers of stroke stories fail like this. Get caught up in the excitement of the story and then peak when you think you've reached the best part. I think you published it too soon. You should have left it for a week and then come back and polished it.

Good, but could have been a lot better.

Thanks. Reads well. Surprising ending - or was it the start of a new phase in their relationship?

I'd love to read more of this where they make sure she gets pregnant by one of them.