All Comments on 'Let It Go, Let It Come For Me...'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Romantic and sexy story...

Beautifully passionate...

Even 'dirty' girls like me can appreciate knowing what this feels like from your point of view.

Maybe you can write about what it feels like for you when she is swallowing your cock... Gently or forced, either way is hot. (for this dirty girl)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
For me?

Such love; passion.... This writer - he must be something special....

He really did love me I think. I was just too jaded to feel it. His words will haunt me forever....

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wonderful

Beautiful and very erotic. Wonderful work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
the disappointing sting of reality vs. fantasy...

shamefully sweet story....why can't there be real men like this?.....

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