All Comments on 'Let Me Be Yours'

Really good. You could of improved if Lizzie went down on her mother. I would like to see a second chapter.

Wonderful story with a perfect mix between love and lust. Agree with previous post would like a further chapter with Lizzie showing her mum how much she loves her and how the relationship developes. Love your writing and hope you keep posting stories. 5stars

Once again you've knocked it out of the park! Far too many incest plots (lesbian or otherwise) kick off with some physical show that jumps straight to lust; putting the feelings first is a refreshingly wholesome change of pace. I love how Lizzie's attraction bubbles up out of "pure" daughterly love: how her jealousy and yearning bridge the shift from the needs of a child to the desires of a woman in a way that feels emotionally consistent. The text has a few minor typos, but its spirit shines brighter than a hundred in this category.

Please continue this beautiful story 🤩