All Comments on 'Let Me Show You Pt. 01'

by sweetnkinkynerd

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BuffyvampslayBuffyvampslayover 8 years ago

More please. Please continue this story it's really good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great beginning

I enjoyed that you didn't make the daughter some innocent virgin. It makes it more believable when she makes advances toward her father. She knows what feels good and she wants it. Who better than her loving perverted Daddy to give it to her.

Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
3

Good start, but any submission should be at least 3 times this long.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Awaiting part 2

Good so far awaiting her father to give her what she needs a good fucking.

prop69prop69about 5 years ago
Loved the story. Make me hard.

Can’t wait for the next chapter when Daddy goes a step further.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
I need more

That was so amazingly hot! I need more! I wish I was her!

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayabout 5 years ago
that's it?????????????

just another tease story

justwarped2018justwarped2018about 5 years ago

great start keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Basic

So basic

horne5horne5about 5 years ago
good

keep writing i hope he pops her cherry

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Too short

Little sad all these men using her....dad does not even care about the teacher watching...he gets hard over nothing....no issue with either of them and what is happening...no discussion just masturbate for me and she is like Okt..also not how a girl would get off in class.but whatever

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Too short

Dad does not care about his daughters safety, either.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Finish the story with part 2. Sheesh don't leave us hanging!

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