All Comments on 'Let's Make a Scene Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

EXCELLENT story, very pleasant to read despite sometimes some lengths which contribute nothing to the unfolding of the story. The author captivates the reader, perfectly conveys the psychology of the characters.

Spanking and flogging are well described. Sometimes the master is perhaps too hesitant. Editorial error? We'll find out if there's sequel. Let's hope so.

lavendersilklavendersilk5 months agoAuthor

Thank you for your kind review. I will try to be more concise in future chapters. ❤

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