All Comments on 'Lettie and Piper 01: The start'

I suspect that another epic lesbian serial has just been kick started. It's a beautiful scenario, Pixie, beautifully crafted and written, as usual. I already love all three main characters and I look forward to learning more about their sapphic menage-a-trois in the much anticipated follow-on chapters. I hope that my 5 stars are the first of many.

Thank you so much, my darling Olwen xxxxx

Oh my, where do I begin? A sweet Love Story. A mature woman, with power. A middle-aged woman who wants to give up her daily power to her young sweet lover. My heart is racing.

If I didn't know any better, I swear you inhabit my dreams and my mind Pixie.

For those of you who need some background music to your Love Story, I offer you this - https://youtu.be/s2zhZ7bco_M?si=PI7imAQBNwXhswYD

I sometimes feel so inferior when I read your stories and then read something I have written. Chalk and Cheese.

Thank you for the theme tune, Bobbi, as well as the kind comments xxxxx

Pixie what a way to start off a Monday to wake up and see a new wonderful series from you. And what a great start. In just two pages you can cover a lot of ground and help quickly set the stage of who are the players, their background, needs and desires. You are such an inspiring author who knows how to bring your fans into the emotions of the characters. As exciting is to see that your first two comments are from two of your fellow authors, who in their own rights are well respected and write entertaining stories, you should be very proud of the affect you have on so many folks who enjoy your talents. Cheers.

Pixie, this is an amazing set up for what I am certain will be an amazing series. do hope I can follow along as each is published. Just amazing

Pixie as always your story delights and entertains us. Please consider adding a proof reader.

This does sound is if it might get complicated, I do hope that I can keep up with the different permutations as they unfold. As usual dearest Pixie you have laid the foundations for what promises to be a very enjoyable read.

Interesting beginning to what surely will be an intriguing tale. And as a near hopeless romantic, the start of an intriguing love affair. As always, the stage is set so well.

Thank you so much, Qwer, and like you, I am delighted that the first comments are from two authors I respect. I am glad you have enjoyed this, and there is more on the way xxxxx

Thank you, Aoife, I am so pleased that you like it xxxxx

Thank you, Into, I shall look into the proof-reader side of it, I am glad my errors have not spoiled it for you xxxxx

Thank you so much, Alice, I hope that as it unfolds, it will become clearer what the main thrust of this is to be xxxxx

Thank you so much Migbird. I shal bear in mind your romantic temperament when proceeding xxxxx

How delightful. Being guided into a relationship by an older wiser woman who knows exactly what you both need.

Very apt choice of names for the characters. Margaret is of course the authoritative decision-making figure, Lettie is lactating, and Piper will be using her mouth a lot.

This is going to be fun.

Thank you so much darling Amadeus, you catch the reasons for the names perfectly xxxxx

omg, this is right up my alley. So, so hot :)

Thank you, Jackie - coming from you that is such a compliment xxxxx

Added aside: reference to Piper’s relationship with Annie — depicted so well/so real in short space — brought back to my mind Annie from The Weir Gate — arguably for me one of your truly unique characters in just two “chapters” in a beautifully crafted romantic piece. Would have loved more. Get that she was with Pixie and this tale is around Piper. Just saying because your writing resonates in so many ways.

A petite and powerful opening chapter from our petite and powerful author, Pixie!

You have set the story in motion with exceptional character development and wonderful plot twists.

And yes, a teasingly fun glimpse of erotica!

You have pulled us in; now take us on an amazing ride!

Thank you so much, Migbird - and of course the resemblance is indeed there xxxxx

Thank you so much, Paul xxxxx

Oh Pixie. This played with my mind. My brain is just whirring. It's so amazingly erotic. What a wonderful start to the day x

That was so innocent and lovely . More please .

Another great start to what I fully expect to be a first rate series. As always you outline the characters so well, in such a short opening introduction. AND it wouldn’t be a Pixie story if it wasn’t a little unconventional; Lady Margaret is dominating the power balance between the Piper and Lettie and will always be the top cat, and directing what the other two are allowed to undertake. Her refusal to let Piper to Climax on their first date will no doubt be a feature of their relationship to come.

Obviously five stars awarded for this opening chapter.

As always a gentle kind story full of sweet people looking for love and finding it. Well done my darling girl, your devoted Mama Serrada 👏 5 🌟 and my ❤️

Cool story, boo. Loved it. Can't wait for more. A x

Hierarchy, some minor role playing against type to establish a bit of equilibrium in Piper and Lettie’s relationship, and a powerful figure in Lady Margaret as a guide: A very interesting setup. Now I’m left to wonder just how much Lady Margaret will be participating in the ultimate consummation of Piper and Lettie’s love making. There are some delicious possibilities when one considers the premise. (Side note: I also noticed a few typos, etc, but they didn’t majorly detract from the overall narrative. I suspect this is another story that “bubbled up” and Miss Pixiehoff just went with the flow). - A proof reader might help, and I’m sure one could easily be found. As always, I look forward to the next chapter. 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

Thank you, so much Katie - and I understand xxxxx

Thank you so much, Tasha, there is more to come xxxxx

Thank you so much Wiz, I am so glad that you are enjoying it xxxxx

Thank you so much Mama xxxxx

Loved the twist with Lady Margaret, playing matchmaker and Mistress. Well done!

Thank you so much, April xxxxx

Thank you, Anonymous, and you are right, it bubbled up and I got carried away - well as long as it carried you away too, that's what matters. Chapter 2 has been submitted xxxxx

Thank you, Vince, much appreciated xxxxx

Dear Pixie,

I am so glad to see you writing once again.

I also hope that you and June are fine and well.

Can you please tell me the Pixie Category that you assign this new story-series.

v/r

Anonymous

Thank you - this is lesbian love stories x

Pixie, I am captivated. The power balance playing out with the dominant Lady in control fascinates me. As a switch with a sub tendency, I so want to explore where this goes. The refusal of orgasm left me aching for more..........

Thank you Christie_Ann, the next part is up tomorrow, I hope you will enjoy it, too. xxxxx

Dear Pixie,

Thank-you for the response.

Lesbian Love Stories will be a new Pixie Category.

Is this what you want?

Also, what is this new Literotica "List" category.

Please respond Pixie. so I understand how track this new category for you.

Thank-you

v/r

Anonymous

Yes, that will be fine. I have no Leda what the list is.

Unbelievably good, well written and well paced, so much to engage one's mind

Thank you so much, Sars, welcome to the reading community xxxx

And you are off again. Taking all of us on another wonderful fantasy .. this time of Piper ! Thank you for sharing your words with us Pixie !

Thank you so much, SB xxxxx

An excellent start. Loving the power dynamics at play. Very intrigued to see how this series unfolds...

Thank you, Anonymous - hope you will enjoy what follows xxxxx

and while I do not say Piper would follow suite? (I think you meant SUIT)

I am a committed lesbian and have been one all my life, but as I read the first page of this lesbian romance story I was so fucking bored!

Vittorio Vittorossi

That's an interesting one, kbone. Yes, it is usually suit in English, but in US English "suite" as in card games is sometimes used. I must rid myself of the habit.

A very sexy start to a series. I’m curious to see how far lady Margaret pushes the two girls.

I love the sexual tension being danced around, both girls too nervous to act without direction.

Wonderful ❤️

Thank you so much Elle xxxxx

5⭐️ - the same thing was happening to me as Piper by the end ☺️ Emily

Thank you so much, darling Emily xxxxx

You are a gifted storyteller, and I enjoy how you develop the characters and plot. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Thank you so much, wag xxxxx

Dr B; Wow, what a start Pixie, another great story, a cunning plot, drawing one in, with well developed characters, an actual story and finishing with a knicker wetting finale (that's if one wore any). C'ant wait for part 2, 5* naturally.

Thank you so much, Dr B - glad that you enjoyed it xxxxx