by StoryToTell
That was intense, highly erotic and fun to read. The reader is introduced to Jade, who obviously needed/enjoyed this night, given us glimpse into Hope and Kelsie; and you left enough questions on the table about your protagonists their relationships and history that you could easily share more stories if inclined. Regardless, thanks for sharing.
Lost me in the first couple paragraphs when you mentioned C cups and their shape. Really?
A good story needs very little description of the characters. Give the reader little hints, so their imagination can run wild and they'll be hooked way better than being crassly told how gorgeous she is.
The ending was a little abrupt, but other than that, this was an amazing story.
5-stars.