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Diecast1Diecast1about 2 years ago

Very average.

AA++

DanDraperDanDraperabout 2 years ago

This was enjoyable. I was constantly wondering what's going on with this woman he let into his house. But you ended with no resolution, just a very open ending a bunch of questions. I'm hoping this will lead to another chapter and we can find out more about who this mystery woman is.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

There's no ending, no character development of Charlotte, no explanation of the one day gone and returning with with food, clothes and money.

There's just not a lot of substance. Please finish and fill out the character of Charlotte.

stewartbstewartbabout 2 years ago

Now that you have us wondering ? When do we get the rest of the story!

pops12345pops12345about 2 years ago

Bravo! I thought you did a great job. I like the loose ends. It makes the story more real. Life is full of unanswered questions.

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