All Comments on 'Letting Me Watch Her Play Pt. 01'

looking forward to part 2!

Don’t let the basement dwellers get you down. I like where this story could be headed. Take your time to develop it into a hot sexy experience for everyone involved. Don’t forget to be graphic in description of the acts, sights, sounds, smells, etc. Don’t just say, he came in her and it was hot. Describe watching his cock pulsate and spew sperm into her accepting and gratified pussy. Describe what it looked like as it leaked out, how the cum strings were reluctant to break from her red swollen Virginia. What her pussy smelled like and how it made the room smell and how their scent made you feel/respond. Be graphic in the details that follow

your fetish for sharing/pimping your wife out is strong and has undoubtably led you astray.

Pulsating cocks, gratified pussy. JB, some of your commenters write better cuck/pimp and whore stories than you do.

I felt you went a little far with the jump into gang bangs, and I am not a fan of anything being denied to a spouse that allows their other to play around.

But I felt your story was all right, and there were places where the wife really tried to show the husband he is special and above her fuck toys, so I took the story to be ok.

Thanks for writing and sharing, and allowing s oring and comments.

Your story is written just fine.. Any husband that would send his wife out to fuck the whole world by herself without him being there is in the top 5% of dumb asses in the world. She's a slut whore and he's no better.