All Comments on 'Lewd Futanari Succubus Ch. 16'

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TheLongGamerTheLongGamerover 2 years ago

Do you have any plans to release your notes on the game design/ skill trees etc. of Beatrice's world once the story reaches a certain point? One of the big problems with things like SAO is that the game just clearly wouldn't be very good, and so the decisions characters make in improving certain skills, are, in spite of their justifications to the audience and each other, apparently bad choices

JSA69JSA699 months ago

Hottest chapter so far, and that's saying a lot!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Goddamn, this is dirty and demented. And I will not EVER be able to get enough. Not ever. So, I’m afraid you will never be able to stop writing. You just cannot stop!! Your neologisms like “rising cum-pressure”, e.g., are brilliant, beautiful, romantic and utterly addicting. One day —- soon, and then forever—- your neologisms will be spoken of and written about in the same ways that Shakespeare’s have been for centuries. The primary differences will be that Shakespeare’s will be seen as less inventive, and his love sonnets will pale in comparison to yours, and his will be forgotten. Thank you for sharing your fabulous writing with all of us here. You are a wonderful gift to us!!!

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