by Mister_X_TheStoryteller
I liked this, would love to read more about this one and how she falls deeper.
Jerry needs to teach her how to use all three of her tight holes. Nothing better than hot, tight, teenage virgin ass! Then a fresh mouth for cleanup and firmup for another round of tight teen hole!
I don't get it. You clearly say the Uncles name "Jerry" like a hundred times. Then all of a sudden in the middle of a story BAM, "Bobby". I don't get how the fuck that happens but y'all fucking do it! Boner killer. JS.
Liked the premise. You move the story along. Could of had more detail on her arousal, etc.
Several inconsistencies, proofread and get an editor, it will help a lot. Virgin having an orgasm, that is a bit weird. Virgins more than likely don't have orgasms with the insertion of your cock.
Keep writing.