All Comments on 'Lewd Tales: In The Woods'

by Mister_X_TheStoryteller

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EdthegentEdthegentover 3 years ago
More please...

I liked this, would love to read more about this one and how she falls deeper.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Keep it going

Jerry needs to teach her how to use all three of her tight holes. Nothing better than hot, tight, teenage virgin ass! Then a fresh mouth for cleanup and firmup for another round of tight teen hole!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Part 2

I would love to read another chapter to this story

topleaseustopleaseusover 3 years ago

I don't get it. You clearly say the Uncles name "Jerry" like a hundred times. Then all of a sudden in the middle of a story BAM, "Bobby". I don't get how the fuck that happens but y'all fucking do it! Boner killer. JS.

merrySMmerrySMabout 3 years ago

Liked the premise. You move the story along. Could of had more detail on her arousal, etc.

Several inconsistencies, proofread and get an editor, it will help a lot. Virgin having an orgasm, that is a bit weird. Virgins more than likely don't have orgasms with the insertion of your cock.

Keep writing.

wd56wd56over 1 year ago

there really needed to be a part 2

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