All Comments on 'Lex Julia Ch. 02'

Excellent writing and a continuing plot. The characters are well-developed, especially the females. It's not clear how the plantation is making money to afford Libidus' overwhelming ability to ejaculate over and over. It's also not clear about the politics of the story and how that adds to the wealth and power of the estate. The role of the servants is clear to serve and pleasure Libidus, and allowing those who become pregnant to wed other slaves is good for morale and children add to the wealth of the manor while creating a cast system of children born with "royal" blood. Libdus training and using his favorites repeatedly is a waste of sperm that could be used to father more children. This story can go on until Libdous loses his vitality or dies. since there seems to be no heir apparent. The lack of any kind of conflict creates a story in an empire and an age of violence. Thus, the story even in fiction does not ring true. Still, I like this story a great deal.