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yowseryowser6 months ago

I'm always a sucker for library stories. Would have liked: setting (where is this? what sort of temple? you start well but some further physical descriptions would be sweet), a little more on the characters, their motivations, a detail or two of their inner lives; a bit more lead up. Any and all would make a more pleasing tale. But nicely done.

QwertoQwerto6 months ago

Very good, hope it will have more chapters.

NudeInMaineNudeInMaine6 months ago

I loved it too. My fave toys are butt plugs.

Polly_DollyPolly_Dolly6 months ago

Misfire. Was going to say, “More!” Um, I mean, more please.” Can’t wait to see what other classics (or not) are highlighted in the mix.

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Had a lot of fun writing these stories for my girlfriend, and she like them too. Though to myself: "Why not publish them?". All criticism is welcome, but deep down, I hope you'll like them too

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