All Comments on 'Life as a Rogue Ch. 04'

Good but these short chapters are not cutting it. You need write longer ones because I get into the story and then it's over.

You just like teasing us and leaving it hanging. They are well structured and good chapters even if short. I'm waiting for the next one eagerly.

Great story. A little short. Can't wait for more

please wright more i love it

Its still a good read keep going. So you have been gone a while, life happens at least you came back.

This chapter was so short, though! I'm glad the next is on its way.

Loved it please write more!!!!

i love love it :D well done! yay

Great start! Keep it going!

Nice story .. bt u gotta make d chapters a little longer

A little short...I enjoy your writing,but something more than a 5 minute page would be nice,,a CHAPTER maybe,,,3 or more pages,something to get into,,,keep up the great writing..