All Comments on 'Life Begins'

Good read, like the fact that you had done some research on things like the railway & the gardens near by. Only spolit by the different type face used. Would have been ok for telling his background followed by hers but when they got together a single font would have been better.

I agree the change in typeface was a bit harsh to read, but when the readers nitpick on something like that, you know you've written a gem! About the only thing I would have wished for was a little more dialogue, a bit less telling, but that is really, really nitpicking!

Sorry about the change in font. I actually submitted this as a Word document using a single font, but it has somehow got altered in translation.

Roman

i could here her sexxy english accent in my head....

i could hear her sexy english accent in my head....

Some us us still enjoy the finer things in life. Thanks for a great story

As the kids say, "Sweet!" Here we have really HOT SEX between two delightful people. Both he and she demonstrate that mature is better. They go at life with humor, but rather like teenagers in vigor. Their generous enthusiasm for each other leads right into what is bound to be a long, happy marriage. The writing is stylish, but sexy. I like this tale very much.

A bit long, but well written and an enjoyable read.