by 1965Squash
Chapter 1 and 2 are nothing alike so that comment confused me. Write more! Need to finish! Thank you!
Please come back & finish this story. You left us hanging, that's not nice.
I concur with the comments about being too short. Where is the rest of the story. You are doing quite well with your efforts to whip-saw our attention.
After that non-ending ending (we can not read author's mind),
I downgraded my rating to 3 stars.
Paul in Oklahoma