All Comments on 'Life In Another World Ch. 01'

I like the zenra/perpetual nudity element, but the writing is a bit bland (though competent in composition of course). Actually describing the events happening, rather than making them feel like a summary of what happened made afterwards, would really improve this and make it more engaging and immersive! At least, that's my suggestion, is all.

Though I also have to ponder why something like 90% of the female protags in ENF/exhibitionism stories on this site are slender with C-cup or under boobs. It's just uncanny that one body type is so near-ubiquitous to one genre on this site. It makes the anthropologist in me really curious about the reason each author has for it and what it means about the demographics who use this site. Did this site attract a lot of people who are coincidentally into exposure kinks and also one body type? Is it because they can't decide, want a more generic protag for self-insertion, and/or want to capture more mass appeal, and so base it on their idea of average from Hollywood even though walking down the street would show that that's not the "average" Hollywood wants you to believe it is? Is it because they think any other body type is automatically a "fetish" that belongs in a different story because this one is about exposure and not anything else? Did they just see it in stories of this genre elsewhere on this site and just shrugged and copied it because they felt it kept with the genre and/or was expected? Sadly, whenever I bring this up, they either ignore me or accuse me of something or other for being curious about the subject. :(

Just started reading, great 1st installment looking forward to more.

@Cyberweasel89 well, about the body type. I’m just using my own body as reference. It gets more engaging as the chapters go on.

@Cyberweasel89 hey, I'm not the author but I'll try responding to your comments based on my own opinion.

I disagree with you about the story being bland. I actually enjoy the way that the author doesn't put too much details on events and get on to the spicy stuff. Many stories that put too much details bores me and I tend to skip paragraphs because of it. So in this case, I think it's not too long or too short, just enough.

I dunno about 90% ENF/exhibitionism story are dominated by slender female body type, but I assume that's because many author self insert themselves. I'm a chubby girl myself, but I still enjoyed them nonetheless.

Anyway, don't think too much about it :)

I mean... it's just fantasy porn/smut in the end, and people want to actualiaze their fantasies in form of writing.

@cmnfans

Thank you for the wonderful comment. It’s nice to have a fellow woman liking my story. No one likes excessive details on the boring stuff and you get it. Thank you for that :) I certainly don’t enjoy writing introductions but I do it and kept it simple.

Excellent beginning with a lot of promise. I love the fact that you gave exactly enough backstory with the information that explains so much of what has and undoubtedly shall occur. I can’t wait to get deeper into this tale to see the direction it takes and the adventure that awaits.

Lexx xoxo