All Comments on 'Life Is Too Short Ch. 03'

Good story!

5

Ted seems like a huge pushover. She told him to start dating and now that he is and he seems happy without her now its a problem. She doesn't even come across as a good friend she's always bitter and jealous. Give my man Ted a break lmao.

MC needs to go on a LONG vacation and meet some new women.

The talent of the author is excellent. The story itself is well written. I've tried. But I just can't get interested in this story.

Good story, I like it. AAAA++++

Great writing but an intensely disappointing 'plot' To make this story complete Allie should have 'caved' and seen that Ted was the main choice. Kudos to Ted for getting with Marcie and I suspect in real life this is the way it would likely have gone given Allies poor reaction to both Ted's and Dave's wishes. She is not much better than 'Pam' Overall 5***** Thank You

I'm mainly with 'PrivatePerv' but with the adjustments I detail in my comment.

Teds damned if he does and damned if he doesn't. He should have had enough balls to tell Rena thanks but no thanks and stop letting Mr. Johnson do his thinking for him. I guess I'm as bad as Ted at reading women because I can't figure out Allie either.