All Comments on 'Life of Mick Ch. 03'

Loved it , brilliant continuation, do I detect romance in the air. I guess I'll just have to wait and see .

Just remember that Mick had no idea that his sons were fucking their stepmother. Yes. His sons are being very disrespectful of their father but I can't imagine many teenage boys turning down the advances of an ultra-sexy stepmother. Mick is doing everything he can to not lose his second wife the same way he lost the first. He finds out there are many ways a marriage can go south. Don't be too hard on Mick. He didn't know until after Miranda died. By then his sons are gone. I think there could be ways for him to get back at them without appearing to be vindictive. Without them even knowing, just like Mick didn't know. We'll see.

Given how your protagonists usually handle things, my guess is Mick will have sex with his daughters-in-law with his son or sons in the room, possibly with his stepdaughters in the room eventually, but I suspect we are several chapters away from that given how a good story tends to develop and how you tend to write.

I am enjoying this story and hoping that we do not hear any more about your ungrateful sons.