All Comments on 'Life Sentence Ch. 06'

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Rad'lRad'lover 13 years ago
Getting a little deep -

but - that's the nature of the thing.

Thanks.

NightGirl359NightGirl359almost 13 years ago
oops

I like the series, but too many typos in this one...

MVPrimetimeMVPrimetimealmost 13 years agoAuthor
Typos...

Guilty as charged. I write these stories on my iPhone, so between the lousy keyboard, autocorrect, big fingers and general laziness, typos creep in. I do try to edit them out, but sometimes I am too keen to post the story - I find when I finish it I don't want to read it again, just get rid of it, move on to the next.

No excuse, just apologies, and I will try harder...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

great series well done thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
good story

i have really enjoyed this story hope theres another couple of chapters in this to see how it finishes

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Badass

"No Penny, not your fault. Madame Rouge. The Committee. The Circle. Mine. But we will see about that."

We will see about that, yes, yes we will.

I love a good vengeance tale.

Horseman68Horseman68over 2 years ago
Nice.

Now if they can only pull it off without raising suspicion.

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The story of my life is not as interesting as the versions of that story that I write and submit here. I am not fast at writing, so please bear with me. Now that the Bad Penny story has been completed (witht eh Always turns up sequel) I have to admit that "If I Knew Then.. "...

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