All Comments on 'Life Under the Sea Ch. 03'

I'm not sure what to make of this story. There are definite overtones of incestual lust, but will it go further than that? The characters aren't really being developed much, so I can't understand what motivates any of them. Jessie is the most fully developed, but still after three long chapters, I know very little about her. We learn in this installment that she has parents and a cousin, and that she left home suddenly at age 18 (and it sounds like she broke all ties with her family). No reason is given as to why she would do this.<br><br>

She sleeps nightly with Riley, and one morning he does awaken with sexual arousal -- but it sounds like he's not really interested in Jessie. It's all sort of weird and semi high-schoolish at this point. Such as Lily wanting to play a prank on the humans, and being a ringleader, and the others easily falling into her plans.

good story, but why shy for jesse? Looks like if she is more of a virgin than in chapter 1. Are you suggesting there is more to Jesse and Damien than there is? Why the breakup with her parents? Questions unanswered. But continue please

this is such a great story please continue......there are so many unanswered questions but all in all I love it please don't stop writing I love the whole thing with daimian Riley and Jesse, please please continue writing

More chapters for this......