All Comments on 'LifeSim: Breeding Expansion Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Let's go!!! Love it can't wait to see who he hooks up with next.

Ilfen1Ilfen1over 2 years ago

This is a highly original concept executed very well. I eagerly await the next instalment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Interesting start! Always enjoy these sort of accident and enjoyment types

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is one of the most interesting stories I've ever read, and extremely well written. I can't wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Would there be something leaning towards explanation how not everyone else bought a copy of the game?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please continue this story!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

When is Chapter 2 arriving????

Buster2UBuster2Uover 2 years ago

Wow Very interesting story, so different yet delightful! LOL Everyman's dream come True! WoW Amazing.1

BeardedlotusBeardedlotusover 2 years ago

Neeeeeeed more of this

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

If you want to encourage other authors to use this story's premise, then please consider adding "LifeSim" as a story Tag.

I also look forward to more of tjis story !

Thank you very much for writing this story

CorninmyAssCorninmyAssalmost 2 years ago

Are there any stories like this??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Love it.

More please.

And thank you.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I just ran into this story for the first time. Absolutely love it. I hope at some point you pick this back up and write more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Oh, wow, this is a fun romp. AI turns a fantasy PC game into reality. Can’t wait to see the wife in the role of voyeur.

Plus, there are some fun questions to ask. Can he turn off the game? Can he resist or will the game simply alter his avatar?

Fun chapters ahead for sure 🥳

Cutty4637Cutty46378 months ago

Love this story concept.

TheEvilQueen_TheEvilQueen_8 months ago

I really appreciate that the MC Kenneth seeks to remain faithful to his wife, and that the magic of the story urges him to his wilder impulses despite his resistance. Much better than the stories where the lead takes advantage of others at the first opportunity—even if I do also enjoy many of those stories!

oksideshow859419oksideshow8594196 months ago

Great storyline I'm eager to read what may follow.

🙊🙉🙈

ereaderlereaderl6 months ago

5 thumbs up, what a great story line, can't wait to read on.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

More

randomletters42randomletters423 months ago

Ofc this could be a totally different story, but can't help but comment that is find it exit hotter if it was not so .. explicit that he was for sure going to be impregnating everyone. Like, leave some suspense, it's not like HE knew, so the reader has a bit too much information.

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I write short, erotic stories that heavily feature a loss of control. These are usually told with a focus on the victim, and often the events of the story will be the unintended consequences of the victim's own actions. I try to post a story or new chapter at least once every ...