All Comments on 'LifeSim: Breeding Expansion Ch. 01'
by fidget1
- 22 Comments
randomletters423 months agoOfc this could be a totally different story, but can't help but comment that is find it exit hotter if it was not so .. explicit that he was for sure going to be impregnating everyone. Like, leave some suspense, it's not like HE knew, so the reader has a bit too much information.
TheEvilQueen_8 months agoI really appreciate that the MC Kenneth seeks to remain faithful to his wife, and that the magic of the story urges him to his wilder impulses despite his resistance. Much better than the stories where the lead takes advantage of others at the first opportunity—even if I do also enjoy many of those stories!
Anonymous9 months agoOh, wow, this is a fun romp. AI turns a fantasy PC game into reality. Can’t wait to see the wife in the role of voyeur.
Plus, there are some fun questions to ask. Can he turn off the game? Can he resist or will the game simply alter his avatar?
Fun chapters ahead for sure 🥳
Anonymous10 months agoI just ran into this story for the first time. Absolutely love it. I hope at some point you pick this back up and write more chapters.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoIf you want to encourage other authors to use this story's premise, then please consider adding "LifeSim" as a story Tag.
I also look forward to more of tjis story !
Thank you very much for writing this story
Buster2Uover 2 years agoWow Very interesting story, so different yet delightful! LOL Everyman's dream come True! WoW Amazing.1
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoWould there be something leaning towards explanation how not everyone else bought a copy of the game?
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoThis is one of the most interesting stories I've ever read, and extremely well written. I can't wait for more
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoInteresting start! Always enjoy these sort of accident and enjoyment types
Ilfen1almost 3 years agoThis is a highly original concept executed very well. I eagerly await the next instalment.
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