by Lifestyle66
Fun couple and an enjoyable series that moves along well. Very well done with good storytelling and a great plot line. Keep it going and time to let these fun folks open up their sexual adventures some more. Thanks for your time to write for our enjoyment. Cheers
Here we go again. Jan is still bending the rules to git her situation, but wants her husband to follow the rules. While the story premise is god, theidtill is a lack of resolution or emotion between these two. He calls her on her violations but so what? He never shows the least bit of emotion or anger. What the hell ? That is not normal. We have to suspend a lot of believability while reading the non stop sex at these gatherings, with virtually no emotion shown by any character. What you write is done well however no one “cares” about any of the characters. No body identifies with any of them. It’s all vanilla. Like a newspaper report. Only a 3. No 😊’s