All Comments on 'Lightning Pt. 01'

great start.....

Good beginning!

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Hmmm, lots of ways to take it from here. I'm looking forward to reading the next installment. Oh, and just to chip in my two cents worth, lust at first sight is a very real thing. I spied a lady sitting alone at a large party. After we held eye contact for a good while, I walked over to say hello. we exchanged greetings, got a look at the rings on our respective hands, and she laughed and said, "Please, just stay the hell away from me and save me from myself." I laughed and quickly walked away. I had fantasies about that lady for many years.

Looking forward to the next segment. Excellent beginning.

Really good start, looking forward to part 2

5 stars from me

10 Big Blazing Stars for a very interesting start, not sure what is happening, but we desperately need the next chapter! Who is this woman? How did she find him? What is it that she wants? Why does the wife keep saying there is nothing to worry about? The more the wife says "nothing to worry about" the more concerned I get! Buster2U

Wow! What a cliffhanger! Five stars!

Interesting, good stuff, nice plot that’s just a bit different, nice work so far waiting for part 2.

Withholding judgment till the next post but I do NOT like where this is going

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Not a romance

Interesting so far………..