All Comments on 'Lightning Pt. 03'

Really? His mum thought he wasn’t eating enough? Were Helen and Lauren complaining that he lacked stamina? Good story, I’m a little surprised they didn’t have kids with the women taking turns being pregnant. One kid each, they’d have their family. Raising the kids with three parents in the household must be a lot easier than a conventional arrangement.

It takes all kinds to the world!

5

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.......hmmmmm....no longer fits in the Romance category. Though well written and shows how polyamory can work as long as there is open communication and understanding. Hats off to the author though this tale is off the grain a little from the normal romance. It works in this fantastical scenario.

Solid 4 stars for the writing. I give it one more star for deserving to be in the Loving Wives category, but was written in a style that allows it to barely slide into the Romance section as well.

Side note: I have read many stories that deserve to be in multiple categories. Readers usually will score a story lower if it is in the wrong section. I try not to do that though I have been guilty of doing it sometimes. I hope that the readers judge the story more off of the writing than an emotional response.

Sincerely,

Payenbrant

Lucky people !

Great silly story