by StolenCandi
good premise, but really really really needs an editor
waste your time or invest yourself
story is 5 years dead & unfinished
this chapter came off very slut shamey. I will read on and see what happens though.
I'm really feeling this first chapter. Keep i up.
I'm loving it, cant wait for more :)
Write more ASAP!!!
But way too short and what a place to have a cliffhanger lol
And a great start! More please..........................
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