by silkstockingslover
To be honest your last couple of stories didnt do it for me . But thanks for taking the time to write them
Phenomenal story and character development. In retrospect, I'm impressed that you were able to tell the story from both the Aunt and the Niece's perspective. Bravo! ~Deep Bow~
Loved it. Just one thing.. I wish you didn't repeat things we already know. An example.. Saying black ass/white dick over and over when you simply can say ass/dick. It was annoying me hearing that constantly. Otherwise, the story was enjoyable.
Totally enjoyable as always
You always get the blood going to all the right place’s
Well written, just a couple of errors your beta reader missed: Page 1, Tyler never went down on her; Page 2, admittedly, Tyler did go down on her.
One time, Marissa became Marina ;)
Otherwise, a good read.
328. Yes. Wicked and twisted. Would love to have the mother visit and get seduced by the sister and her daughter.