All Comments on 'Like Brother and Sister Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Quite like this story but not sure how it's an incest story. We're at chapter 2 and so far no incest.

linnearlinnearover 3 years ago
Nice Story

I can't wait to see more of this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Like it so far.

Waiting for ch. 3. Like how’s he’s playing with the sister friend before. Moving a little slow. Great so far

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
4 Short but humourous?

Okay so it's short & it's a monster dick story. I'd like once in a while one on this site where the main character had an average one like myself & imagine most of the guys reading. There is some humour based on his size so fine. I chuckled. As others have said I didn't catch any errors. It's fun so I can wait for the incest or whatever boning your sisters best friend you've known most of your life is called,

bshell47bshell47over 3 years ago
A slow build, but well done,

How soon before someone gets Nekkif!

Julie owes Ryan some action

WHYN0TWHYN0Tover 3 years ago

the guy is a total fucking loser. he might as well just be a dildo, all he's done is stand there. what kind of retard can't figure out he should at least TRY to make a move at some point after a chick is literally begging him to show her his humongous cock. This story is garbage

OpenWordsOpenWordsalmost 2 years ago

Why do you write your protagonists as so frail? You REALLY over do it to the point they are pathetic and unrelatable. Realize, please, this RUINS the story. Then you constantly have the women order him around and laugh at him. Jesus, either you are a submissive male, or you seriously need to learn some self esteem.

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