Like Brother and Sister Ch. 04

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"We're gonna get going," said Melanie as she looked at Sarah. Sarah was busy staring at the cum soaked table as she desperately tried to prevent herself from scooping up and putting it in her mouth. She nodded affirmatively, collected her things with Melanie and let themselves out.

As Ryan cleaned up his mess, Julie turned to him. "Are you ok?" Julie asked Ryan. He was busy cleaning his mess from the table, glasses and part of the floor. He paused looking up at her. He was still naked, his now softened cock was resting on the table top. "What do you think?"

"Right. You want me to talk to her?"

"No, you don't have to. I'll figure it out."

Julie walked up to Ryan and put her hand on his cheek. "It'll be fine. Trust me." She glanced down towards his cock and lifted it up from the head with her fingers. "This thing has gotten you in a little trouble lately, huh?" she teased.

He smiled. "It sure has."

Julie kissed him on the cheek before collecting her things and leaving.

Standing naked in the basement, Ryan looked down at his cock. It had gotten him so much attention lately, yet garnered trouble at the same time. "What are we gonna do with you, buddy?" he asked.

It was time to talk to Nicole.


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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Weak male character. A 12yo might have been so shy and awkward. At 21 he should have at least used the "I'll show you mine if you show me yours" on Julie!

TEXASMADDOGTEXASMADDOGover 1 year ago

The positive comments are great...the negative ones need to go away...this is a FANTASY story (obviously) and it is moving along just great.

Ryan is having fun, learning about limits, or lack thereof.

Shooting his mum across the table and onto his sister, Nicole...priceless!! Should have expected something to happen like that!!

And now, he gets to go "talk" with his sister...hopefully this is gonna ESCALATE QUICKLY...Ryan needs some pussy!!

Five**5**Stars🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠😈😈😈😈😈

WargamerWargamerabout 3 years ago

Becoming too silly. Why make the MC a gormless stupid dupe who acts like a young teen?

Ruins the story, this guy has experience with sex why make him so brainless?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Chapter Edits: Extra Details

I hope the author reads this and goes back through the chapters and edits them

In this chapter I wish they had played some other drinking games and maybe dared people to kiss or something before moving into the quarters (seemed a little rushed) and then I would've liked to have seen Julie or one of the girls egg on Nicole to touch Ry's dick when they are stroking him like "when will you ever get another chance I mean he's your brother but not like you'll do this regularly it'd be awkward" then she touches/strokes it quickly and goes back to sitting cause it's too awkward and blushes then maybe a scene where Nicole gets turned on in the shower cleaning off Ry's jizz after she runs away then contemplates why she is getting turned on

Also a Chapter 4.1 would be a nice addition with maybe a couple masturbation scenes of Nicole where her brother's cock pops into her head and dirty conversations about the night with Julie (with her saying something like just thinking of that night and Ry's cock gets me wet and the amount he came was unreal wasn't it Nicole I mean he covered you) then Nicole gets embarrassed about being soaked in cum and changes the convo but notices that she also got wet talking about it before the next chapter (2 weeks later)

booty77loverbooty77loverover 3 years ago

to bad it dident hit her in th face 100% HOT thanks!!!!

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