by bumpercars
“Do the heroes in your books talk that way, nerd?" she asked.
How did the villain know Hero was a reader?
Thanks for sharing this deliciously wicked and well written tale. More of the same please including the lifeguard at the university pool or newlywed landlady?
Anon,
I think that the Villain is a pretty good judge of character. She'd already identified Hero as a nerd, and so she figured that Hero probably read a lot.
Pretty good story but how did the blonde know that she read books about heroes or pickpockets? That part n the fact a boy was willing to commit rape like it was no big deal dont make sense. Had you explained a way to make those 2 things make sense it could have been a 5star story
Please keep writing more in this series. Great story and I want to know more!
Anon,
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm certainly going to write more stories, and we'll have to see what tropes come up.
rorr82,
I'm glad you mostly liked it.
I don't think that Villain knew that Hero was reading books about thieves - she just guessed that Hero read books since she looked like a nerd.
I do feel that this story wasn't aiming for realism, but at the same time, I don't think that a boy being willing to rape a strange girl is the most unrealistic part of this story.
Anon,
I'm certainly planning to write more stories. I don't know if I'll follow up on these characters, but we'll see.
Good story, but I would have ended it differently, "In the following week, I walked around campus looking at guys, looking for some guy that would give me a strange knowing look back."
Anon,
I'm glad you liked the story.
I get where you're coming from about the ending. I'm sure that a part of her wants to know who he is. But I think another part of her doesn't, because knowledge is power, and she likes being powerless.
I came so hard to this, I really need someone to fuck me rn.
I need to be breed 😩
Once again you didn't fail to get me wet and horny. Not so much imagining I was (the hero/victim) but as the blonde sat on her. I think I'd have had to have rubbed myself on her somehow not just to get off but 'mark' her too. I'd love to hear about the villain and henchman watching and tormenting her a little on campus. Thanks for some material to Jill off and orgasm too. xxx
DirtySingleMom,
You are quite welcome - I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
I think that, if the villain hadn't needed to keep the hero from seeing the henchman's face, she probably would have jilled off or rubbed up against the hero properly.
You raise a fun question, regarding what else the villain and henchman might do to our hero. I could certainly see the villain going up and rubbing her belly, or teasing her in class to try to get her wet, or taking her picture to send to her henchman. I don't know if there's another story in it but it's fun to think about regardless.
Anon,
Yeah, I'm almost finished with a new SLT story, and I hope to have a new Date Night chapter not long after that. I've had some tough family stuff to go through, but I'm still writing.
I adore this, as I've adored all your stories. Thank you so much for sharing them with us!!!
acganderson,
You are quite welcome, and thank you! It's nice to hear that you're enjoying them.