by sharakiley
Best story I've seen on Literotica. Too bad it ended without anything about future stores, of the like.
I only gave 4 stars because this has the possibilities of being like the story of Jocks forced to participate in a bunch of challenges, and as they said in Shawshank Redemption, disappear like a fart in the wind."
i reallly liked this and cant wait for the next installments, thanks for sharing.. fun and interesting.
Very interesting story. I’m impressed you came up with this line of thinking. I’m hopeful there will be future chapters of this story. I’m hooked!
Thank you for a novel and exciting premise. I like the slow simmer leadup to whatever comes next. You have me, hook line and sinker. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.........
Amazing work!
I love slow build, getting in the story and things getting more and more perverted!
One of the best stories I have read on this website. Hope we'll get to read the following part soon!
Similar to other comments, I’m liking the slow build and great writing. Kind of a gay squid game vibe. Love it. So when is the next installment?
I downgraded to one star because this started out as a really good story and then the writer left us hanging
DIdn't see the 'gay' tag before reading it. Impressive, as others have said, as a story concept and in execution. If you carry on I suggest you make it 'mixed,' and not simply gay, so as to appeal to a wider audience. I appreciate it was all young men entering the facility but that does not necessarily limit it. The images, after all, were various.
Naughty to have left the story hanging so long. It is best, really, to finish a story before posting chapters!
Great so far, realistic well developed plot and characters, well paced. I wonder if the A.I. just following instructions or will it develop an additional agenda of it's own? Guess I'll have to wait and see.
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