All Comments on 'Lilith Of Fire And Brimstone Ch. 01'

by PlasticJane

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
not bad!

not bad at all!

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

PaaskonijnPaaskonijnalmost 13 years ago

Good start, but you could really do with going over and editing it a bit. A lot of sentences seem to miss words or punctuation, making it a bit difficult to read.

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