by Freakyus
Wonderful and tingle creating as always. :) can't wait to read the next bit... I'm crushing slightly on Lauri, having handled snakes it would be delicious to curl up against her scaled skin... Mmmm...
Please do not stop writing this great story as it is one of the best stories I have read on this site for quite awhile. I can not wait till Eve and her friend hatch to see what they are and if they are different from the present 3 Nagas. An exquisitely written story with an excellent plot and exquisite character development. I have given you 5-STARS forv each chapter so far and will continue to do so. The story plot is different from anything I have read before but I love it. So please don't do what 85-90% of the writerson this site do s and leave a very, very fustrated reader and that is they do not finish their stories and thus leave a very, very frustrated reader base. Retired Army NCO
Of Laurie and Lilith. Very well written and put together storyline.
5/5 stars on every chapter. So many orgasms in just two hours, over the course of these seven chapters! You do writing and character development well. I didn't feel like this was just a porn story, though it did serve that purpose well, I felt like it was a story with lewd elements. PLEEEEEAAAASSSSSEEEE write more! All this sciency stuff, and the revenge plot of Eve, and the sub-revenge plot of Laurie! Moooorrrrrreeeee!
I'm not a vore fan normally but I have loved this piece and hope you will continue the tale soon. I really want to see the reveal of Eve and her ultimate plan.