All Comments on 'Lilliths Tails 07: Lilliths Passion'

by Freakyus

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XarraXarraover 7 years ago
Lovely work...

Wonderful and tingle creating as always. :) can't wait to read the next bit... I'm crushing slightly on Lauri, having handled snakes it would be delicious to curl up against her scaled skin... Mmmm...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
A great story!

Please do not stop writing this great story as it is one of the best stories I have read on this site for quite awhile. I can not wait till Eve and her friend hatch to see what they are and if they are different from the present 3 Nagas. An exquisitely written story with an excellent plot and exquisite character development. I have given you 5-STARS forv each chapter so far and will continue to do so. The story plot is different from anything I have read before but I love it. So please don't do what 85-90% of the writerson this site do s and leave a very, very fustrated reader and that is they do not finish their stories and thus leave a very, very frustrated reader base. Retired Army NCO

Dont_miss_meDont_miss_meabout 7 years ago
More more more

Of Laurie and Lilith. Very well written and put together storyline.

VanadornVanadornabout 7 years ago

Very enjoyable. Please continue.

-V

Yuno_GasaiYuno_Gasaialmost 7 years ago
Just wow...

5/5 stars on every chapter. So many orgasms in just two hours, over the course of these seven chapters! You do writing and character development well. I didn't feel like this was just a porn story, though it did serve that purpose well, I felt like it was a story with lewd elements. PLEEEEEAAAASSSSSEEEE write more! All this sciency stuff, and the revenge plot of Eve, and the sub-revenge plot of Laurie! Moooorrrrrreeeee!

SerrowynSerrowynover 6 years ago
Fantastic

I'm not a vore fan normally but I have loved this piece and hope you will continue the tale soon. I really want to see the reveal of Eve and her ultimate plan.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very Good

I am very impressed

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

I’m hooked. Please continue this ASAP!!!!!

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